After showing various individuals (including the volunteers for the alternate version) both clips, I asked for them to report back to me on any feedback they had. This was done verbally and online.

Eleanor Smith: "Although the narrative in the original clip is strong, the idea of a party really doesn't resonate with just the main character being alone. The second clip highlights this much more even though the main character isn't actually there. Again with the first clip, it's thought out well, however after reading the original plan of the night before, it gets a little confusing when he's out in the daytime."

Manny Hobbs: "I'm a little biased when it comes to both these versions due to me featuring in the second one! However with my honest opinion I feel the alternate version is much more effective, especially giving off that 'party' vibe. The narrative is a little hard to follow, but after reading the original plan it makes much more sense. If there was less issues with filming and scheduling, I feel this would of been a very successful music video."

Hannah Bradley: "After watching both clips I feel they equally stuck to the narrative and have a resemblance. Starting with the first clip, it's clearly planned and edited well, however to my understanding it's meant to picture a party the night before, which isn't clear with just one character. This is where the second version overcomes this. I can tell they tried hard to include more people despite the lacking of the main character. I feel this works well, although the piecing together of footage is a little confusing which is understandable in their circumstances."